Open Question: What do you think of my poem?

every morning I would see your face every evening I would feel your grace and I never imagined you would go to that place in the sky laughing and dancing with angels and I ask myself sometimes if God even cared about the rare love that you and I shared but I know that you are in good hands now and I must believe that you are in good hands now but I cry because I wish those hands were mine how I wish I could feel you in these hands of mine but baby I know when I see the Sun glow and the birds in the sky are flying ever so high and over the blue seas passes the gentle breeze and the flowers flourish with swarms of bees When I smell the intoxicating scent of the flowers When I hear the wonderful music by the birds When I feel the touch of the wind against my lips When I feel the warmth of golden rays on my face Baby in my memories I can see your face And now every day I can still feel your grace But I still can’t believe that you are in that place In the sky laughing and dancing with angels ——————————————————————————————– This poem was straight from the heart. It is for my girlfriend Heather…….

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