Open Question: whats your opinion on my lyrics?
just gonna put this out here im just starting out at this whole songwriting thing in my band we play rock n roll music if that makes a difference lets go back to that place of ours i shut my eyes and there you are is it 6 or is it 12 your the problem that i cant help but solve so close but so far away when your an ocean away right here but so far away i want you but your an ocean away im up all day your up all night its my fault just dont sleep tonight darling my love please dont slip away i need you but your an ocean away so close but so far away when your an ocean away right here but so far away i want you but your an ocean away kiss my lips anywhere anytime lets keep talking and ill be fine i know im crazy but i know you like it come over here baby you know that its right, yeah this makes no sense, i guess i dont care but were too far apart when im here and your there i know that i’ll see you again someday but darling my love please dont slip away
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Open Question: whats your opinion on my lyrics?
